You will have approximately one week to work on most of your graded essays, plenty of time to plan, pre-write, write, revise, and proofread, major aspects of the writing process that I feel are vital to writing a good essay. However, you do not have as much time to write this analysis essay as it will serve as a practice for the College Board test. Because you do not have a lot of time to work on this essay, I don’t expect any literary masterpieces, but I do expect the basics:
• at least 500 words.
Do the best job you can in the short time you have to write the essay.
The AssignmentMaya Angelou’s “Graduation” is the story of Marguerite Johnson’s eighth-grade graduation, but the events of the story and Marguerite’s reactions to them also suggest Marguerite’s personal growth in terms of her understanding of herself and others.
In an essay, explain how Marguerite gains a greater awareness of herself and others in Maya Angelou’s “Graduation”. You can assume that your audience has already read “Graduation,” so you should not just summarize it. Instead, try to focus on answering the question above.
One of the first things you should consider when you begin working on a short essay is how you will divide your essay into different body paragraphs. You will need a minimum of three body paragraphs, along with an introduction and a conclusion.
For your other essays, you will need to decide on the main point of each body paragraph, but, for this essay, I will give you suggestions concerning what you might discuss in each body paragraph. I usually do not give such specific suggestions concerning what you could write about and how you could organize, develop, and support your ideas; but, because of the limited time we have for this essay, and because this is the first essay in the course, I have included specific suggestions below for each body paragraph of your essay. Again, in the future, you will need to do this early work of deciding what you might explain in each part of your essay.
Below are questions that you might use to help you organize and develop the body of your essay:
• Body Paragraph 1: How do Marguerite Johnson and other members of her community feel about the upcoming graduation? Why is the graduation important?
• Body Paragraph 2: What is the effect of Mr. Donleavy’s appearance and speech at the graduation ceremony? How does Marguerite react to Donleavy? How does Marguerite’s attitude toward herself and others change because of Donleavy?
• Body Paragraph 3: After Donleavy leaves the graduation ceremony, how does Marguerite’s attitude change and what causes this change? In the end, what does Marguerite’s learn about herself and others?
Answering these questions should help you prove your thesis, or the main point of your paper. You might start by coming up with one sentence for each of the body paragraphs that would answer the questions presented above for that paragraph. This sentence could serve as the topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph, and you should then use specific examples from the story, including quotations, to help you support and develop the idea throughout the rest of the paragraph. In each body paragraph, you should stay focused on proving the claim you make in the first sentence of the paragraph.
You will also need a one-sentence thesis statement in the introduction of your essay. The easiest way to formulate the thesis statement is by combining all of the main ideas from your topic sentences into just one sentence.
Of course, you can come up with your own questions to help you develop your essay, and you may discuss any aspects of Angelou’s essay as long as your essay addresses “how Marguerite gains a greater awareness of herself and others.” The suggestions above are just designed to help you get started on this first essay and to give you an example of an effective way to think about the organization and development of ideas for an essay before you begin writing a first draft.
The minimum required length for this essay is 500 words.
Preparing and Posting Your EssayYour essay should be word processed and double space. Type your name, class, the assignment name, and the date in the upper left corner of the first page, and give your essay a title (different from the title of Angelou’s story).