You have used specific reasons, facts, examples, details, and/or description to make your essay or story clear.
Your writing is clear and focused.
Your essay or story moves fairly smoothly from introduction to conclusion.
You have an introduction and concluding statement or section that are clearly connected to the rest of the essay or narrative.
Your writing has balance and moves along evenly.
This essay is sufficiently long and complex and shows command of a wide range of conventions.