Wrting test 18

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You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Read the following extract from an article:

Smoking is the biggest cause of preventable deaths in England, accounting for more than 80,000 deaths each year. One in two smokers will die from a smoking-related disease. It can also cause fatal diseases such as pneumonia, emphysema and lung cancer. It causes 84% of deaths from lung cancer and 83% of deaths from chronic obstructive lung disease, including bronchitis. As a result, some people agree that world governments should conduct serious campaigns against smoking.

Write an essay to an educated reader to show you opinion about the consequences of smoking and possible solutions. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words.

Smoking remains as a recurring topic on the list of the main issues around the world.The causes and effects of smoking are being discussed frequently among our society, and more and more solutions to resolve this issue are being brought up worldwide. This essay will discuss the consequences of smoking and possible solutions.

Firstly, smoking is harmful to one’s health over a long-term period. Smoking causes many different types of cancer including lung, oral, and kidney as well as esophagus cancers. Smoking also results in chronic bronchitis, and many types of breathing disorders. In England, smoking accounts for more than 80,000 deaths each year.

Secondly, there are more harms in smoking then just the long-term effects. There are facts about the harm it does to others that breaths secondhand smoke, along with the chemicals that make up a cigarette. The chemicals alone are enough to make anyone want to quit. These chemicals are in small amounts, but still are hazardous to the health of both smokers and non-smokers.

We need to stop this problem with some particular solutions. One way people can stop dying from cigarettes is to stop selling them. People will get a benefit because they can save money and their own life. It will be really helpful. It also gets and saves stamina for work or playing with their kids. Saving money can go to your kids for college or for clothes. So stop smoking can help your whole family.

Also, cigarettes should be switched to electric ones. This will also be a cheaper solution because smokers just have to buy them once and charge them.  So it will save lots of money. Smokers can also smoke wherever they want because it will not affect the people around. It will save the body because they will just get pleasure without the harsh chemicals.

In short, smoking is very harmful to smokers themselves and to all people around. In order to stop people dying from cigarettes, we need to stop selling them, or switch to the electric version.

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