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9 Essays earning a score of 9 meet the criteria for a score of 8 and,
in addition, are especially sophisticated in their argument, thorough in development or impressive in their control of language.
8 Effective
Essays earning a score of 8 effectively develop a position that not only reflects the arguments presented in the resources, but they additionally develop and elaborate their own particular argument expanding the points brought forth in the texts provided. They develop their position by effectively synthesizing* at least three of the sources. The evidence and explanations used are appropriate and convincing. Their prose demonstrates a consistent ability to control a wide range of the elements of effective writing but is not necessarily flawless.
7 Essays earning a score of 7 meet the criteria for a score of 6 but provide
more complete explanation, more thorough development or a more mature prose style.
6 Adequate
Essays earning a score of 6 adequately develop a position that reflects the arguments presented in the resources. Their expansion of the argument has good ideas but does not elaborate fully. They develop their position by adequately synthesizing at least three of the sources. The evidence and explanations used are appropriate and sufficient. The language may contain lapses in diction or syntax, but generally the prose is clear.
5 Essays earning a score of 5 develop a position that reflects the arguments presented in the resources. They develop their position by synthesizing at least three sources, but how they use and explain
sources is somewhat uneven, inconsistent or limited. Their expansion of the argument has good ideas but does not elaborate fully. The argument is generally clear, and the sources generally develop the student’s position, but the links between the sources and the argument may be strained. The writing may contain lapses in diction or syntax, but it usually conveys the student’s ideas adequately.
4 Inadequate
Essays earning a score of 4 inadequately develop a position that reflects the arguments presented in the resources. They develop their position by synthesizing at least two sources, but the evidence or explanations used may be inappropriate, insufficient or less convincing. The sources may dominate the student’s attempts at development; the link between the argument and the sources may be weak; or the student may misunderstand, misrepresent or oversimplify the sources. The prose generally conveys the student’s ideas but may be less consistent in controlling the elements of effective writing.
3 Essays earning a score of 3 meet the criteria for a score of 4 but demonstrate less success in developing a position that reflects the arguments presented in the resources about fast food’s responsibility to American obesity. They are less perceptive in their understanding of the sources, or their explanation or examples may be particularly limited or simplistic. The essays may show less maturity in control of writing.
2 Little Success
Essays earning a score of 2 demonstrate little success in developing a position that reflects the arguments presented in the resources. They may merely allude to knowledge gained from reading the sources rather than citing the sources themselves. These essays may misread the sources, fail to develop a position that evaluates, or substitute a simpler task by merely summarizing or categorizing the sources or by merely responding to the prompt tangentially with unrelated, inaccurate or inappropriate explanation. The prose of these essays often demonstrates consistent weaknesses in writing, such as grammatical problems, a lack of development or organization, or a lack of control.
1 Essays earning a score of 1 meet the criteria for a score of 2
but are undeveloped, especially simplistic in their explanation, weak in their control of writing or do not allude to or cite even one source.
0 Indicates an on-topic response that receives no credit, such as one that merely repeats the prompt.
— Indicates a blank response or one that is completely off topic.