modern movies seem to go against the tradition of scary vampires of the past. This has caused much debate between the old
vampire fans and the new vampire fans.
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. The attractive young vampires
C. The attractive, young, vampires
D. The attractive – young vampires
Coordinate adjectives need to be separated with a comma. (Correct)
Missing the comma (Inc)
Never place a comma between adj and word it modifies (Inc)
Incorrectly emphasizes “young vampires.” (Inc)
This generation is living in a digital world that keeps
on growing. Technology is making it much easier for
people to communicate as well. E-mail is now a necessity.
It is how everyone communicates when it comes to
business, school and family “Neuborne.” Cell phones are
widely used as well.
Generation Y has become very familiar with all of the applications of cell phones whether it be texting, IMing, e-mailing, downloading, music. ("Generation Y: the Millennials") Another huge trend among Generation Yers is social networking. Millions of users log onto Facebook or MySpace every day to update a status, upload pictures, or chat with friends (Yan).
BONUS QUESTION!! What kind of sentence structure is this?