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Example PEEL Paragraph (Point): During the 1980’s the push for recognition of indigenous rights moved into the international arena. (Explanation): Kakadu National Park became a World Heritage area listed site, recognised for its significance to indigenous art, culture and history. (Evidence): When Pope John Paul II visited Australia in 1986, he recognised in a statement that a just and proper settlement with indigenous Australians had yet to be achieved in the wider Australian community (Smith 2001: 91). Meninga states that “even though the 1967 referendum changed some things, the issue of indigenous rights still has not been resolved properly” (2006: 54). (Link): This demonstrated that the struggle for recognition of indigenous rights did not end with the changes to Aboriginal citizenship resulting from the 1967 referendum. COMPLETED PARAGRAPH During the 1980’s the push for recognition of indigenous rights moved into the international arena. Kakadu National Park became a World Heritage area listed site, recognised for its significance to indigenous art, culture and history. When Pope John Paul II visited Australia in 1986, he recognised in a statement that a just and proper settlement with indigenous Australians had yet to be achieved in the wider Australian community (Smith 2001: 91). Meninga states that “even though the 1967 referendum changed some things, the issue of indigenous rights still has not been resolved properly” (2006: 54).This demonstrated that the struggle for recognition of indigenous rights did not end with the changes to Aboriginal citizenship resulting from the 1967 referendum. Example Bibliography Books Smith, R.J., 2001, History of Indigenous Australians, Oxford Publishing, Sydney. West, P., 1968, The 1967 Referendum, Allen & Unwin Press, Brisbane.
Andrews, R.S., 2011, Indigenous Rights, Available at URL: www.ir1967, (accessed 20th March 2011). Australian National Museum, 2010, The 1967 Referendum and the Struggle for Indigenous Rights, Available at URL: www.australiannm/referendum/indigenousrights, (accessed 13th May 2011). Draft Assignment Feedback Form
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