Bbyo summer Experience Scholarship Request Letter outline



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BBYO Summer Experience Scholarship Request Letter OUTLINE

Note: This outline is meant to serve as a working document to help guide you during the scholarship request process. A scholarship/financial aid request letter needs to be extremely personal, professional, and clear. Please use this sample outline as inspiration for how you can layout your story.
In addition, this outline is written from a teen perspective, but it could be easily adapted to come from a parent perspective.
January 1, 2010

Mr. John Doe

Name of Organization

1234 Main Street

Somewhere, ST 12345
Dear Mr. Doe:
In the first paragraph, begin by explaining the purpose of your letter, including your request for financial assistance. Explain that you would like to attend a BBYO summer experience program and describe the specific program that interests you. It may also be a good idea to mention any extenuating financial circumstances and other assistance that you have received or requested so the organization to which you are applying knows that your interest in the program is serious.
In the next paragraph, emphasize why this program is important to you and to your local Jewish community. Give specific reasons as to why you want to attend this program. (Sample program descriptions are included below to help you describe each BBYO summer experience.) How will this program shape you and your connection to Judaism? How will this program enhance your relationship to the local Jewish community? Perhaps mention a willingness to volunteer at the organization in exchange for scholarship funding. Explain that you would be happy to share your summer experience with your local Jewish community in some way – presentation, written report, slide show of your photos – to show the Jewish community the experience that this organization’s funding was able to give to you.
Take the third paragraph to tell a little about yourself. Where did you go to school? What clubs or activities are you involved in? Do you have any leadership experience? Have you won any awards? Are you currently involved in the Jewish community?
In the final paragraph, emphasize again your interest in this summer program, this time mentioning that the cost is a hindrance to your attending. Offer the opportunity to send additional information on the program incase they have any questions.
Thank the organization you are requesting money from in advance for any assistance they might provide. Let them know the best way to reach you.
Best regards,
Abby A. Applestein

(This letter should only be one page maximum except for extenuating circumstances)


BBYO Summer Experience Scholarship Request Letter SAMPLE

Note: This sample letter is meant to serve as a working document to help guide you during the scholarship request process. A scholarship/financial aid request letter needs to be extremely personal, professional, and clear. Please use this sample outline as inspiration for how you can layout your story.

In addition, this sample letter is written from a teen perspective, but it could be easily adapted to come from a parent perspective.
January 1, 2010

Mr. John Doe

Name of Organization

1234 Main Street

Somewhere, ST 12345
Dear Mr. Doe:
I am writing to request financial assistance in order to attend a BBYO Summer Leadership Experience. I am interested specifically in attending Kallah, BBYO’s Judaic enrichment summer experience. The three week-long Kallah program, which takes place at Camp Perlman in Lake Como, PA, takes participants on a Jewish journey through a variety of Judaism’s defining ideas, values and texts, while placing a special emphasis on the power of community-building and Jewish pluralism. Due to a recent change in my family’s financial standing, I am reaching out to several local organizations to provide me with the financial assistance I need to attend this exciting summer program. I am reaching out to Name of Organization for assistance because I am familiar with all the generous support you have always provided to members of the Jewish community.
Participating in Kallah is very important to my personal Jewish growth, and I believe it will provide me with the skills I need to build and sustain a Jewish community here at home, in college, and in my adult life. In addition, I hope to bring back knowledge and perspective to share with my local Jewish community and even with your organization. I would be happy to volunteer at your organization in exchange for scholarship funding or share my experience in some way with the local Jewish community.
I have always been dedicated to leadership in the Jewish community and in my schools. After my Bat Mitzvah, I remained an active participant in Temple Beth Shalom. In addition, I am a junior at Smith High School, where I serve as the secretary of the National Honor Society, play varsity basketball and am an active member of the Spanish club. I have also been a dedicated BBYO member for the past 3 years, in which I have served on the chapter board several times. In fact, my local program director, Name Name, recommended that I attend this program to expand my potential as a community leader.
Attending Kallah would be an irreplaceable opportunity for me. However, without financial assistance, my family will not be able to pay the program cost of $2,700. I would be happy to provide further information on the program should you have any questions.
Thank you in advance for any assistance you might be able to provide. The best way to reach me is by email at jdoe@bbyo.org or at 123.456.7890.
Best Regards,
Jane Doe

Sample Program Descriptions

Program Name:

Chapter Leadership Training Conference (CLTC)



Program Description:

CLTC is a two-week dynamic training experience for emerging BBYO chapter leaders. Participants come away understanding all the BBYO basics – including chapter positions, exciting program ideas and recruitment – and have access to a wide variety of resources, designed to introduce leadership concepts and chapter management skills. The program also includes engaging Judaic rotations and an overview of the many opportunities for meaningful involvement in BBYO.



Program Name:

International Leadership Training Conference (ILTC)



Program Description:

ILTC is BBYO’s three-week leadership summer experience at Camp Perlman in Pennsylvania focused on Jewish leadership, not only within a BBYO context, but more broadly. The program asks questions such as, “What does it mean to ‘live a Jewish life’? What are the important values in the Jewish tradition?” ILTC teaches how to lead successfully within BBYO, but also inspires participants to look within themselves to discover why Judaism matters and how it informs day-to-day challenges and decisions.



Program Name:

International Leadership Seminar in Israel



Program Description:

ILSI is BBYO’s premier leadership summer experience, and is a great opportunity to gain an ‘insider’s perspective’ on Israel through touring, sight-seeing and an academic experience that goes beyond the headlines to understand Israeli history, culture and politics. The spiritual and Judaic dimensions of being in Israel are core to the program, and help build a strong Jewish identity as well as a profound sense of connection to the land and people.



Program Name:

Kallah


Program Description:

Kallah is a three-week Judaic enrichment experience in which participants engage with Jewish ideas, values and texts that enrich Jewish identity and understand some of the core principles and traditions that define Judaism. The program, which takes place at Camp Perlman in Lake Como, PA, takes participants on a very personal and meaningful journey exploring a variety or Jewish ideas, while placing a special emphasis on the power of community-building. Participants are exposed to the pluralistic spectrum of Jewish expression and connect with a faculty including some of the most talented leaders, thinkers, artists and creative minds in the Jewish community today.



Program Name:

Passport to the World (P2W)



Special note: This program will require more detail in the program description, including trip destination and length.

Program Description:

Passport to the World is BBYO’s global travel program for Jewish teens of all backgrounds. Each program shares the same core elements – active touring, community service, cross-cultural interactions, and meaningful Jewish experiences.


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